This essay will
be about anonymous, the group who wants “freedom” no information hidden. Most of
them are hackers but there are a lot of people who aren’t, they just have the
same thoughts and want to know all the information about things.
These people in
the group anonymous think Wikileaks are a good thing, Wikileaks who is a site
where top secret classified documents could be, and are posted. The people who hosts Wikileaks don’t even read the information they just put it out
there. For example, if you are a man who works with the government and you got
high status got information about that the government are spying on the people
or if American soldiers are shooting civilians in war. No one know about it but you and the government you
can send a file with the secret documents to Wikileaks without really risking
to get fired or anything to happened.
I really do
think that the people have right to know about the secrets that’s isn’t being told
by the government and is posted on Wikileaks, like the bank in Iceland, the
bank lend money to people who they shouldn’t lend money to, but they did and
the bank had no money left and all the peoples savings and money were gone, and
the bank came up with a explanation, I really don’t know what they said but
wikileaks came with the real reason why the bank had no money left, and the
people weren’t glad to hear what happened to their money, they where really
angry and disappointed. I do think that wikileaks did the right thing to expose
them.
I don’t think the
news, newspapers really lie but the might twist the truth a bit and are for
sure not telling the whole story, they are telling the part that the news or
newspaper think is enough and I don’t think they are allowed to say to mutch
about it, if they would know something I don’t think they are allowed to the government.
“In the End, we will remember not the
words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends”
-Martin luther king jr. (1967)
Text by Fhilip Borg Pålsson.
Hej Fhilip,
SvaraRaderaNär jag läser din uppsats märker jag att du har reflekterat över Anonymous och det arbete som de utför. Bra! Det som du kan förbättra vad gäller ditt skrivande är att vara uppmärksam på meningsbyggnad och framförallt meningarnas längd. I bland blir det svårt att uppfatta vad det är du vill säga med din text eftersom meningarna är så långa. Sätt punkt istället eller kommatecken om meningen är lång. Du slarvar även lite med stavningen och grammatik. Men oroa dig inte, vi kommer att träna mer på att skriva under terminens gång så du kommer garanterat att förbättra dig. Innehållet in din uppsats är bra och du lägger även till dina egna tankar, vilket gör uppsatsen levande.